ŌTAKI COLLEGE BOLLARDS
W.A.L.T express our ideas about the bollards installed along our driveway. We are using descriptive language and checking our sentence structure is correct in our blog writing.
A cuple of days ago there where bollards put down the driveway the color of them where blue to represent the college. They where put there so no one walks on the road otherwise they might get run over they are also there for if a car losses control going down the drive way they will hit the bollards and they wont hit us but It would be bad for them because they might get hurt and we wont. also they are there to stop anyone riding there bike scooter's down the driveway because might corss the crossing when your not looking and you might run into them. also blue is my favourite color and they have shiny grey chains dangleing down and conecting to the other post. we are only aloud to cross the crossing just down from the entrance of school. no one is aloud to cross the road unlees your using the crossing
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