On the 19th of November Tuesday we went to capital E and Te Papa. At Capital E we made our own music. At Te Papa we all chose what we wanted to see. my group went to Nature, Gallipoli and Toi art. Gallipoli
was my favourite.
Here is a picture ↓
Toi art was really cool it would has taken ages to put up. I just wanted to run through it. I wonder what it would feel like.
here is a picture of Toi art ↓
the Nature zone was basically about history. at Nature there was a new Earthquake house we went inside, it was just like a real Earthquake.
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Friday, 22 November 2019
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Hi Ethan, Its me Ella-Jaye um maybe delete the second capital e bc it sounds like there's to many, and maybe you could add a bit more information like here for example / I went to the movies and I watched dora and boots and it was weird but amazing, like I hated it😣/ so maybe a bit more , but on the bright side you writing the story is what really matters😦😑😐😁😃!!!!!
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