Wednesday, 19 September 2018

this is my letter to the council about windmill being put up in front of my house

Dear Council,

My name is Ethan Bevan I live on 56 it  Street I'm writing this so you don’t put up any windmills in front of my million dollar house. 

With all the noise it will be hard to relax and get to sleep and the other people next to us won't be able to sleep and relax either. The windmills will be way to loud for some people going past. It might be so loud that I might leave my house and go live somewhere else, do you really think that I would want to do that. 

The view will be the worst with all the windmills in front of my house it will look hideous and awful. It will be boring looking out the window and seeing boring windmills every time. It could be the worst view out of all the properties around us 

 The environment might not come any more and  if they do they might hurt themselves by flying into the windmills. it will ruin the environment, will it be worth it. 

Don’t put the windmills in front of my house you should put them somewhere else.   

From Ethan

1 comment:

  1. Hello Ethan, I think this is really cool but you should proof read it (:

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